Poem2024-07-25T09:32:52+00:00

Good Try!

By: Rose Bloom

Ha!
That was pretty cool,
The way you approached me.
Pretty confident, yea, you were.
I liked that very much!

But...
hmm, you were lacking something.
I could just see the act in your eyes,
The pretense that you really wanted me.

I know the game, I've been in it.
I can tell when you want me,
or when you want it...
This time round I know you only want "it."

That was a good try...
Very intelligent,
But I beat you in this game.
And will beat you in the next.

I want a man who cares,
Not a boy who thinks he can win every game.
A boy only wants that something,
But a man wants it all...

That really was a good try...
Keep it up,
Perhaps experience really teaches the fool...
You will learn, just in time.
Hopefully!