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Tranquility Space
by Ali Stone
I dreamt about another world much different then this one. 
Purple plains, yellow skies, and a bright blue electric sun.
The people there were weird and square.
With  marble skin, and spikes for hair.

They welcomed me with opened arms.
And showed me all their many charms.
To my delight they invited me to stay and play a while. 
And what could I say but 'Yes' because it truly makes me Smile.

I asked, "What is the name of this wondrous place?"
And their response surprised me so.. "It’s called  tranquillity’s space."
So any time you want to come, just close your eyes and dream.
You will find us waiting here in your minds machine .

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