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I won't stop
by Xalthia Orion Star
Just because our life stopped,
Doesn't mean I've stopped.
You were my life once but now it's far away.
Just because we've stopped,
Doesn't mean my tears stopped.
I can pine, yet, I can keep walking away.

I won't die because of you.
I won't lie because of you.
I won't give you anything more than you deserve.
I won't stop because of you.
I won't drop because of you.
To ask for more would be cheeky and the nerve.

Just because our life stopped,
Doesn't mean I've stopped.
You kept taking and never would you give.
Just because 'us' stopped,
Won't mean I must stop...
I've got what it takes to stand up and live.

I won't fall because of you.
I won't crawl because of you.
I'll strive on through troubles until I reach a shore.
I won't stop because of you.
No, I won't stop because of you.
I won't be under the dark cloud you left for me anymore.

I won't stop...
		

 
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