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Poem: The Fall

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The Fall
by Libby
I fell into
the depths of
your eyes
but I didn't know
the fall
would land me
on this rocky shore.

My only escape
is to sail
the stormy sea
and hope
I will be breathing
when I reach a land...
free of your touch.

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