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a long and lasting love
by fang sHafanlv lou
a long and lasting love,
i don't think such a thing exists in this world.
i wanna own such love,
but they told me that we don't work.

you won't like me
i did try to just put you as a close friend
but i can't
it seems that every time i felt sad
the first person I'd think of is you

the stars are sparkling because of you
whenever i cry for you
the sky seems to be raining
it is like the sky is dropping tears for me

i know you and I aren't meant to be
i just want to see you when i need you
but you've changed
because there's another girl in your life

you said you will never change
but that's a lie...

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