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The empty Rain
by Rose Bloom
Loud bang of thunder
as lightning strikes
deafening tons of ears
the rain, it begins to pour
like a burden upon my head.
The swerving wind,
brings chilled air in the room in which I lay
with its bare atmosphere,
and its silence to applaud a drop of a pin.
Every other little sound,
but the beat of my lonely heart,
the only sound I hear.

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