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Where you going
by En. Luv
                      I couldn't breathe this evening
                       you never told me you were leaving,
                    tell me you love me with a smile
                     then maybe I'll go, and be no one for awhile.

                      I guess that's the way the story goes
                       here, this once take it, a rose,
                    make a friend with it, unlike myself
                     I'll just go and put my heart up on a shelf.

                      Your eyes never let me down, my love
                       filled with so much beauty, that I'll think of,
                    I could go die now but will not
                     hopefully we'll meet again on this very spot.

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