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by frozen time
 You ask me to explain to you the way I feel,
but when I look into your eyes... I don't know if you are for real.

 I long to see your face, day in and day out, 
but I am afraid your head is filled with much emotional doubt.
 You will never know how much you mean to me, 
yet, I can see in your eyes a longing to be free.

 I do not know how to explain to you the way I feel tonight
so I will just sit here and hope my emotions are right.
 My feelings for you have grown like a plant left in the rain, 
but if you say, "no"... will it still be the same?

 I do not want to lose this close friendship we have,
I do not want to forget your smile or uplifting laugh.

 I need to know what our friendship holds, 
is it love or just friendship... does nobody know?

 I think of you and the secrets we've shared, 
all of those things, I thought nobody cared.

 Just promise me one thing and will you tell me, too- 
how you feel and what should we do?

 I am sorry if my emotions have scared you away 
but something deep inside tells me you will stay.

 I wish everything would work out overnight, 
I wish I could say it will all be alright.

 But I do not know how you feel, 
please tell me this in not a dream...
                   but something true and for real.

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