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Taken
by Amanda  Lee

Something's being taken from me,
my heart breaking as it goes.
I want to keep it so badly,
not to let it go.

I'm feeling so lonely,
so empty inside, not me.
It's not totally gone yet,
but soon it will be free.

My happiness is gone,
as saddness sets in.
My life is being dropped,
as quiet as a pin.

You don't hear the pin drop,
when it softly hits the ground.
You won't hear me either,
i'll hit without a sound.

I'm almost there,
I can feel myself falling.
Going down slowly,
No more time for stalling.

All my emotions are bottled up,
kept inside for too long.
Everyday i get weaker,
no longer strong.

Everything that makes me happy,
is being taken away.
I wish, for just once,
it would all just stay.

I was falling in love,
I could tell it was true.
The feeling was great,
I knew I loved you.

But now someone else,
is taking you from me.
I want my own life with you,
for us to be free.

I don't want this to happen,
but it is... once again.
Just please remember,
I will love you till the end.
        
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Poem ID: 6695   Poem Posted: 8/2/1998
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