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I Feel You...
by David  Becerril

Whether it be your letters, pictures 
or the fragrance that you wear; 
From a distance I can feel you, 
there's no question that you care. 

I feel the depths of your loneliness, 
your passionate moans and groans;
Tonight I appeal to your sense of patience 
it won't be long before I come home, 

Do you have time for an honest man 
from whom nothing but good can come, 
Are you scared to face your destined fate, 
unsure of what's to come? 

I have injected my soul 
into your body infecting your inner parts, 
Seduced your mind until I find 
the secrets of your heart; 

I bet you think I'm gaming you, 
just like all the men in your past;
Because all of them promised you Heaven on Earth 
but none of them seem to last, 

AFTER ALL WHAT CAN I OFFER YOU? 

Besides lonely nights 
and sweet words, 
Promises of pleasure to come 
and lines you've probably already heard!

All I can say is have faith in me 
and in time maybe you'll come to see; 
The definition and true meaning of friendship 
that can be discovered in ME! 

Today we exchange promises, 
tonight we pray they?re kept, 
In the morning we wake to face tomorrow 
with anticipation on each breath; 

For the moment we accept our situation, 
in hopes they'll change in time, 
Heaven is love, hell is loneliness 
yet they both exist in our minds; 
Some say friends are overrated, hard to find and quick to change 
and even I believed this true. 
Until the day I met you...
I FEEL YOU! 


dedicated to: Cynthia R.
        
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Poem ID: 87738   Poem Posted: 2/14/2009
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