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Poem: In Retrospect


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In Retrospect
by Remember Love
You taste like sea water, tooth paste and beer
You smell like cotton sheets in sunlight
You feel like satin bathed by moss and mist
You kiss like a husband... long lost

You breathe in and out and I feel my chest rise and fall
   You demand 
    You command 
and you whisper sweet begging’s in my heart’s ear 
Like a tide coming in and going out 
As you surge into my consciousness I am overcome and undertowed
Till the wind blows hard off the rock edges of my sanity 
And I am owned and owned and owned again
...Simply a feather resting lightly on the tip of cragged forever
		

 
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