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fear
by christy elizabeth sassy
you hide your fear, you
hide your tears, you try 
to hide you pain 
everyone says they know 
what's going on. you hide 
everything till you break 
you can't handle it anymore 
you lying there in your 
room, crying, yelling, wishing 
you were gone. you lock 
yourself in, you hide, yelling 
why is everything going so 
wrong? why is life messing 
up? i don't know what to do 
anymore. who knows when 
everything will be right back 
to the way it was before? i 
thought it was real when you 
said you loved me, but i guess 
it was all fake. i guess everything 
was fake. i don't know anymore 
am i fake too? am i some little 
thing in someone's mind? if i am 
why? why am i here? what am i 
here for? no one hears you, no 
one sees you hiding alone, alone 
in the dark with no one around 
hinding away from everyone and 
everything, not knowing where 
everything is, sitting there crying 
wishing i was gone, gone away 
from everything; gone, gone from 
the pain, from the light, from the 
day. hide away from everything 
everything in my life. the day has 
come for your voice to be heared 
standing in the middle of the room 
yelling, i'm here, i'm right here. wake 
up and look at me. holding back the 
tears, i can see you looking at me 
reaching your hands out for me, but 
you're too far, too far to grab. i can't reach 
you. i run to get to you, yelling, don't 
leave me all alone in the dark. don't 
go, don't go. i'm alone, i'm alone in this 
place. life is no more, no more than a 
rose left on the door of your true love.
		

 
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