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Poem: Our first dance


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Our first dance
by sarina awal
The night when we first danced,
It was like a magical thing.
I loved the way you touched me
and your sweet voice everytime you sing.

As we moved to the rhythm,
You held me in your arms so tight.
In our very own land,
we danced all through the night.
You make me feel like no one can...
Everytime you take me deeper into the music,
I wish that the moment will never end.

By now, you should know
exactly how I feel...
My love for you is true
and I'm not afraid to dream what is not real.
		

 
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