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Love
by william alvarez-builla
"D," I ain't gonna lie to you,
I really love you, and I mean it, too.
I wanna tell you how I feel,
Tell you that my love is real.
I asked for a chance, and you gave me none,
Equal to the hugs and kisses that apparently missed me.
And all the pain I conceive makes me feel less free,
As if love and pain were together making everything stable,
Describing my life as one of incredible memories,
Of loves only remembered, and not entered.
Watch as I finish my rhyming and very deeply defining
How I feel about you, Darling, as I sit here writing.
My feelings towards you, mostly feeling blue, 
As I say, "I love you."
		

 
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