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Special Kind Of Fool
by vanessa hawkins brown
I used to be in love with you
But the way you treated me wasn’t cool 
But I could see nothing
'Cuz I was... a special kind of fool 

You stay out all night and don't even call 
You don't love me- you don't care at all 
The way you hit me and slap me- that ain't cool 
But all I know is... I’m a special kind of fool 

When my friends told me to leave you alone 
I told them to go home and find a man of their own 
I gave you my heart and love is what it meant
I loved you so much... on you all my money I spent 

To buy you all the things in the world 
To let everyone know I was your girl 
But when I came home I felt much shame 
You were playing me... like a Nintendo game 

I came to the house to check on the 'groom'
You and another girl were there in my room 
I was so hurt, I fell to my knees
Asking God... "Why me?"

You know what God said to me...?
"The way you loved him- that wasn't cool 
But I couldn't tell you nutin',
'Cuz you is... a special kind of fool"
		

 
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