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Why did he wait so long?
by High On Life!!
You looked at me with a soft spoken glance
Did I really see that, or am I in a trance?
You hugged me and would not let go
Is this for real, or are we making a show?
I heard my name, you were talking about me
Woa, a whole new feeling, what could it be?
You wrote something down, laid it upon my lap
Is this for me, what is this crap?
It said the words, "You are beautiful"
I thought 'Wow', is he being truthful?
You later asked, we could go out
Is this confusion, can I just shout?
I can't, I'm moving and leaving this place
Is that a tear streaming down his face?
		

 
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